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the prompt is BRAND
"So, what your saying is that we don't have enough money to cover the rent, and you think that driving up to Montreal to gamble at a casino with the money we do have is the best option for getting it?"
She couldn't believe she was sitting in his car heading north, going along with this ludicrous and most likely ill-fated plan as they approached the border to Canada, passed through with their Vermont ID's, and continued on to the outcome she hoped against hope would work out in their favor.
Having only been to Las Vegas that one time, the casino still somehow felt familiar with its low-lights, lack of clocks, and wildly patterned carpet, and she quickly went to sit at the slot machines where she was the most comfortable, as the tables with their high stakes were intimidating and she wasn't that bold a gambler, never having had the kind of money it required to wear one's confidence like a suit.
On the other hand, he went straight to the tables, illustrating one of the key differences in their characters, and probably a good indication that the relationship wasn't bound to last, though that thought (which she had often enough to make her consider breaking up with him at least once a week) always made her think of Philippe Halsman's Jump Book, which seemed to indicate the opposite - that couples who exhibited similar jumps ended up splitting, while those who jumped differently appeared to have stood the test of time.
After an hour of their separate endeavors, he came over to where she was absently watching the virtual wheels spin with eyes that looked to be glazing over and turned her to face his newest idea as it had come to him, and with a contained excitement he began, "I think...instead of this aimless sort of searching for our fortunes on our own, we should team up, pick one game - like craps or roulette - and put the whole pile of what we have left on one bold bet, no regrets."
And so she found herself standing before a long expanse of green, broken by lines and numbers down its center that had no meaning to her, shaking two dice in her right fist muttering, "Come on, Lady Luck, mama needs some brand new shoes..."
(I hope I've done this right, and if not, I hope someone pops in to correct me!)

You absolutely did it right "Mama". Welcome to Six Sentence Stories!
ReplyDeleteNot sure I'm cut out for putting the "whole pile on one bold bet", lol.
Nice buildup leaving this reader on the edge of her seat. Hoping she got those new shoes.
yay! thanks for hosting, I really enjoyed this challenge!
DeleteWhat a wonderful debut! I enjoyed this so much. So glad to see you joining us this week.
ReplyDeletethank you so much, violet! 😊
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ReplyDeleteSerially, a most auspicious début here a Sixville.
Enjoyed the parallelism (or whatever the term is for) compelling the Reader to keep in mind there are two protags. sorta
omg did I see a quote from Malaclypse the Younger in your sidebar? {fnord}
*ha ha, a little flash-fiction humor
omg, that {𝘧𝘯𝘰𝘳𝘥} made my whole day! 😃
DeleteI hope Lady Luck comes through for them.
ReplyDeletelol, wouldn't that be great? but what are the odds?
DeleteThis is Great!!!
ReplyDeletethank you!
DeleteAbsolutely, thoroughly enjoyable, which I think is a far stretch from what "Mama" was experiencing. I am looking forward to reading your next Six! And welcome.
ReplyDeleteaww, thank you so much! you've all been so welcoming, I'll definitely participate again.
DeleteGotta love the setting, though they could have stayed south of the border and gone to the Akwesasne casino in NY. That's a huge risk they're taking. Can't wait to read your second Six Sentence Story to find out what happened. (yep, you can do serials; some of my favorite characters were borne of a Six)
ReplyDeletelol, I don't think the Akwesasne casino had even opened yet when the real-life situation this story is based on took place - and is an hour further away than Montreal (I was living in Orange at the time, off the Brook Rd. from Plainfield). besides, the nightlife up north was way more fun than the nothing there is in northern NY, in my opinion!
DeleteThis is fabulous! Welcome to the Six; you're riding the crest of a wave.
ReplyDeletewhy thank you!
DeleteI enjoyed your six very much, although I'd be on her side to say this is insane.
ReplyDeletelol! agreed. thanks for your visit ~
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