Monday, October 8, 2012

what's this, now?




the unbearable piercing, the slow
                                                  rustled
                                                              fever
the willows
                    sensing
 the charmed breeze
          explode the brittle crust 
                        of their budding sheaths
mending
always mending
always mending



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4 comments:

  1. Nice sound and concise vivid images,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/

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  2. Very nicely worded. Loved how you arranged the words as well.

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